Good advice for reviewing documents.
Regarding this final aside:
II think the user experience around commenting on documents is fundamentally wrong in most document editors. … Ultimately, you want to collect all your comments into a bundle, then review that bundle for consistency and duplicates, and then submit that bundle as commentary, but editors don’t support that flow particularly well.
I’ve made this argument (and others!) against using Google Docs for this type of document and review before and have consistently lost the argument. What does have this flow? GitHub pull requests.